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Falling from faceless faith
So easily...
Shooting stars fall from space,
Joining heaven and earth as one...
Separating space and time.

Too afraid to swim,
I will wait here in the shallows;
Hiding my face within darkness
Until I forget what it's like,
Can't see myself anymore...

I've faded too far...

Nothing is ever good enough,
No matter how hard I try.
It is all disgusting
And ugly...

Full of hatred and putrid violence,
The demon has arisen,
And she is angry...
Nothing but wrath and fear.

Incapable of understanding
What it means to be alive,
Or human.

It's not enough to even say
That I want to be free...
Trapped forever
Beneath this gloomy sky...

Drowning in the liquid haze,
I will never falter;
Even in spite of
The pitch black shadows
That eat away at my soul...

And it hurts...
So badly...
Perhaps...

I have fallen too far...
There is no hope.
:iconkalinereine:
Too afraid to continue... But too afraid to let everyone down... :icongivingupplz:
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~ForestoFairies Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Everyone at least once felt inadequate ...
but there is always hope.
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=KalineReine Jan 28, 2013  Professional Writer
That's very true... :huggle: Thank you. <3
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:iconnocturnejewel:
I could really feel this poem in me...because I've felt this way so often, and I get tired of hurting all the time.
But you did a wonderful job describing your emotions here, I know such hard and painful emotion is not easy to write about. :iconsadhugplz:
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=KalineReine Jan 25, 2013  Professional Writer
I know how it feels to be constantly hurt all the time. That's what people like us get for caring. It's such a sad world we live in... :huggle: I really am glad you like the poem, thank you that means a lot to me. :heart: I do my best to describe an emotion, but it's a lot like trying to capture smoke in your hand. It always manages to elude me just a little.
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~HiddenShadowSpirit Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
"Incapable of understanding what it means to be alive or human."
Perhaps I never will.
Beautiful poem, very riveting.
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=KalineReine Dec 29, 2012  Professional Writer
Thank you... It was just a thought, but also it's how I felt (and still feel). I'm glad you like it and I appreciate the feedback. :love:
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:icontygeira-loves-yooh:
you okay hon? This is really beautiful and well written <3
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=KalineReine Dec 28, 2012  Professional Writer
Yeah, I'm alright... Thank you, that means a lot. :hug:
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:iconkyokokagami:
Life is easier when you don't give a shit. :XD:
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=KalineReine Dec 24, 2012  Professional Writer
True true...
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