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The sky, great lake of fire...
Lost within a sea of orange...
Surviving alone, but in your eyes...
Seeking solace in a dark heart...
Beauty, as it hangs from clouds...
Lost within your sea of doubt...
Lost within a sea of orange...
Surviving alone, but in your eyes...
Seeking solace in a dark heart...
Beauty, as it hangs from clouds...
Lost within your sea of doubt...
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(Each line is six words long...
Yes, even that one was six.
The poem is also six lines.
I think this was really awesome,
And I hope you like it.
I always seem to fall short.)
c:
Yes, even that one was six.
The poem is also six lines.
I think this was really awesome,
And I hope you like it.
I always seem to fall short.)
c:
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This is written in a... uh... different manner. The sentences with the ellipses makes it look like a lot more was still to be said. The meaning is simple and clear and I do find the form quite interesting!