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Floating... Like bitter porcelain clouds,
So sickly and broken...
Distance raking across the catacombs of my heart,
The moonlit cadence singing sweet sonatas
Right into my open wounds...

Tears slowly build,
Crashing in a great crescendo
Sinister tidal waves whisking me away,
Ghosting across a foreign shore...
Hopelessly lost in your eyes...

Slipping away like the tides,
Right through my fingertips...
Ghosting across my lips
To break across the open shore...
Shattered; broken pieces of my heart.

A thimble full of poison is all it takes;
Saccharin sweet candy coated prison
Seeping into my lungs...
One taste of the salty air, and it burns,
Coughing; consumed by acidic addiction.

Lightning streaks across the sky,
Just the way your hands felt on my skin...
Grain of sand breaking the hourglass;
Ruby droplets flowing into the vast ocean
That forever haunts my nightmares...
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=slowslicksnails Nov 26, 2012  Student Writer
I really love the vocabulary you used in here! The last two lines in stanza 4 are my favorites. Great job.
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=KalineReine Nov 26, 2012  Professional Writer
Thank you... :love: I try to describe things using words no one else would think of. Sometimes it's hard to find the right words for what you really mean. I really appreciate the feedback. <3
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=slowslicksnails Nov 26, 2012  Student Writer
There were a couple words I never thought existed before so you did good with that. :nod: you're very welcome!
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